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-Added space after full stop. -Changed time out to timeout. -Removed the redundant para. [Resolved issues from comment- How it Helps," first paragraph: Add a space between the last two sentences: "...look at notes.[SPACE MISSING]They may also..." "How it Helps," fifth paragraph: Remove the paragraph that begins "Users' cognitive skills may diminish..." It is old content that has been woven in elsewhere in this section, so this fifth paragraph is redundant. "Examples," last sentence in 3A: Remove the extra space so "time out" becomes "timeout." Here's where it appears: "...extend the time[REMOVE THIS SPACE]out as it may take..." ]
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How it Helps
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Timed events can present significant barriers for users with
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<a>cognitive and learning disabilitiesa>. These users may require more
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time to read content or to perform functions, such as completing an online
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form. They may need to read help information or look at notes.They may also need
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form. They may need to read help information or look at notes. They may also need
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additional time to look up the information required to complete a transaction.
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How it Helps
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They become overwhelmed with the amount of instructions and data input required to complete the process.
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The user cannot complete the process in one sitting, and takes a break. Their information and work done so far is lost.
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Users’ cognitive skills may diminish as they get tired. They then must stop
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the task for that day. When users know that their data won’t be lost, they
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can recover from mental fatigue and return to successfully complete the
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Mental health disabilities can also cause cognitive challenges, such as memory problems, trouble staying focused,
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and difficulty ignoring distractions. People facing mental health challenges may process information more slowly.
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example: In an auction, there is a time limit on the amount of time a
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user has to submit a bid. At the start of the task, the user is warned
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about the time limit, and how long they have until the time ends. At the start of
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the task/process, also tell the users what they need to do to extend the time out
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the task/process, also tell the users what they need to do to extend the timeout
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as it may take them time to read the notice.
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