Fix some typos and correct wording in the monitoring docs patch

Thom Brown

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
index 3cc5d4df0038bd8660a634e4cc1b8c9dd760b423..840e54aef8a55232bf0dc94c6429b88c7537f00c 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ postgres: user database host 
 
      
       pg_stat_databasepg_stat_database
-      One row per database, showing database wide statistics. See
+      One row per database, showing database-wide statistics. See
         for more details.
       
      
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ postgres: user database host 
      
       pg_stat_database_conflictspg_stat_database_conflicts
       
-       One row per database showing database wide statistics about
+       One row per database showing database-wide statistics about
        query cancels due to conflict with recovery on standby servers.
        Will only contain information on standby servers, since
        conflicts do not occur on master servers.
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ postgres: user database host 
    queries that use the same underlying statistics access functions as
    these standard views do.  These functions are listed in 
    linkend="monitoring-stats-funcs-table">.  The per-database access
-   functions take a database OID as argument to identify which
+   functions take a database OID as an argument to identify which
    database to report on.  The per-table and per-index functions take
    a table or index OID.  The functions for function-call statistics
    take a function OID.  (Note that only tables, indexes, and functions
@@ -522,9 +522,9 @@ postgres: user database host 
     
      datid
      oid
-     The oid of the database the backend is connected to.
+     The OID of the database the backend is connected to.
      This value can also be returned by directly calling
-     the pg_stat_get_backend_dbid.
+     the pg_stat_get_backend_dbid function.
     
     
      datname
@@ -836,7 +836,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
     
      datid
      oid
-     The oid of the database
+     The OID of the database
     
     
      datname
@@ -855,15 +855,15 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
     
      xact_commit
      bigint
-     The number of transactions in this database that has committed.
-     This value can also be returned by directly calling
+     The number of transactions in this database that have been
+     committed. This value can also be returned by directly calling
      the pg_stat_get_db_xact_commit function.
     
     
      xact_rollback
      bigint
-     The number of transactions in this database that has rolled back.
-     This value can also be returned by directly calling
+     The number of transactions in this database that have been
+     rolled back. This value can also be returned by directly calling
      the pg_stat_get_db_xact_rollback function.
     
     
@@ -974,7 +974,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
 
   
    The pg_stat_database view will contain one row
-   for each database in the cluster showing database wide statistics.
+   for each database in the cluster showing database-wide statistics.
   
 
   
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
     
      datid
      oid
-     The oid of the database
+     The OID of the database
     
     
      datname
@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
 
   
    The pg_stat_database_conflicts view will contain
-   one row per database showing database wide statistics about
+   one row per database showing database-wide statistics about
    query cancels due to conflict with recovery on standby servers.
    Will only contain information on standby servers, since
    conflicts do not occur on master servers.
@@ -1067,7 +1067,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
     
      usesysid
      oid
-     The oid of the user logged into this WAL sender process
+     The OID of the user logged into this WAL sender process
     
     
      usename
@@ -1102,7 +1102,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
      integer
      
       The remote TCP port that the client is using for communication
-      to the , or NULL if a unix socket is used.
+      to the, or NULL if a unix socket is used.
      
     
     
@@ -1179,7 +1179,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
     
      relid
      oid
-     The OID of the table this row
+     The OID of the table
     
     
      schemaname