doc PG 17 relnotes: wording improvements, add links, merge item

Backpatch-through: master

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
index 67826262180391dc82750f329b33ab9fa7bc38f4..b15ed9da073b6f1d6db830dcb317b7c635dcbfb1 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
@@ -284,9 +284,9 @@ Author: Masahiko Sawada 
 
     
      
-     Change 
+     Rename 
      linkend="vacuum-progress-reporting">pg_stat_progress_vacuum
-     columns max_dead_tuples
+     column max_dead_tuples
      to max_dead_tuple_bytes,
      rename num_dead_tuples to
      num_dead_item_ids, and add
@@ -337,17 +337,6 @@ Author: Alvaro Herrera 
 
-
-      
-       
-       Allow the optimizer to improve CTE plans by
-       considering the statistics of columns referenced in earlier row
-       output clauses (Jian Guo, Tom Lane)
-       
-      
-
-
@@ -355,8 +344,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
       
        
        Allow the optimizer to improve CTE plans by
-       considering the sort order of columns referenced in earlier row
-       output clauses (Richard Guo)
+       considering the statistics and sort order of columns referenced in earlier row
+       output clauses (Jian Guo, Richard Guo, Tom Lane)
        
       
 
@@ -375,7 +364,7 @@ Author: David Rowley 
        
 
        
-       Remove IS NOT NULL query restrictions on
+       Remove IS NOT NULL restrictions from queries on
        NOT NULL columns and eliminate scans on
        NOT NULL columns if IS NULL
        is specified.
@@ -745,7 +734,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
       
        
        Add log messages related to WAL recovery from
-       backup (Andres Freund)
+       backups (Andres Freund)
        
       
 
@@ -1010,10 +999,12 @@ Author: Alvaro Herrera 
        ,
        , 
        linkend="guc-serializable-buffers"/>, 
-       linkend="guc-subtransaction-buffers"/>, and 
-       linkend="guc-transaction-buffers"/>. commit_timestamp_buffers,
-       transaction_buffers and subtransaction_buffers scale up
-       automatically with .
+       linkend="guc-subtransaction-buffers"/>, and
+       . 
+       linkend="guc-commit-timestamp-buffers"/>, 
+       linkend="guc-transaction-buffers"/>, and 
+       linkend="guc-subtransaction-buffers"/> scale up automatically with
+       .
        
       
 
@@ -1212,9 +1203,10 @@ Author: Amit Kapila 
        
 
        
-       This allows logical replication to continue quickly
-       after the upgrade.  This only works for old clusters of
-       PostgreSQL version 17 or later.
+       This allows logical replication to continue
+       quickly after the upgrade.  This only works for old
+       PostgreSQL clusters that are version
+       17 or later.
        
       
 
@@ -1343,7 +1335,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila 
        
 
        
-       The server variable is .
+       The new server variable is .
        
       
 
@@ -1474,7 +1466,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
      
       
       Add local I/O block read/write timing statistics to
-      EXPLAIN (Nazir Bilal Yavuz)
+      EXPLAIN's BUFFERS output
+      (Nazir Bilal Yavuz)
       
      
 
@@ -2221,7 +2214,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
 
       
       Command \dp now displays (none)
-      for empty privileges;  default still display as empty.
+      for empty privileges;  default still displays as empty.
       
      
 
@@ -2370,7 +2363,8 @@ Author: Daniel Gustafsson 
 
      
       
-      Allow pg_dump, 
+      Allow 
+      linkend="app-pgdump">pg_dump, 
       linkend="app-pg-dumpall">pg_dumpall,
       and 
       linkend="app-pgrestore">pg_restore
@@ -2400,8 +2394,8 @@ Author: Nathan Bossart 
       linkend="app-pgbasebackup">pg_basebackup,
       
       linkend="app-pgchecksums">pg_checksums,
-      <application>pg_dump, 
-      linkend="app-pgrewind">pg_rewind,
+      <link linkend="app-pgdump">pg_dump,
+      linkend="app-pgrewind">pg_rewind,
       and 
       linkend="pgupgrade">pg_upgrade.
       
@@ -2416,7 +2410,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
       
       Add 
       linkend="app-pgrestore">pg_restore
-      option --transaction-size to allow object restore
+      option --transaction-size to allow object restores
       in transaction batches (Tom Lane)
       
 
@@ -2464,8 +2458,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
 
      
       
-      Add pgbench command \syncpipeline to allow sending of sync messages
-      (Anthonin Bonnefoy)
+      Add pgbench command \syncpipeline to allow
+      sending of sync messages (Anthonin Bonnefoy)
       
      
 
@@ -2866,7 +2860,7 @@ Author: Alexander Korotkov 
      
       
       Allow pushdown of EXISTS and IN
-      subqueries to the  foreign server
+      subqueries to  foreign servers
       (Alexander Pyhalov)
       
      
@@ -2942,14 +2936,10 @@ Author: Alexander Korotkov 
 
      
       
-      Allow  to
-      check for unique constraint violations (Anastasia Lubennikova,
-      Pavel Borisov, Maxim Orlov)
-      
-
-      
-      The pg_amcheck option
-      --checkunique will check all unique indexes.
+      Allow 
+      to check for unique constraint violations using new option
+      --checkunique (Anastasia Lubennikova, Pavel Borisov,
+      Maxim Orlov)
       
      
 




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