Doc: update 17.0 release date.

Also some trivial copy-editing.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
index fdbbbed07aaec7308150ff4672a2d18a33284f04..ad814737745b6d08f6cdf832310fcfda3c14f01a 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
   
    Release date:
-   2024-??-??, AS OF 2024-09-14
+   2024-09-26
   
 
   
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
     
      
-      Various query performance improvements, including to sequential reads
+      Various query performance improvements, including for sequential reads
       using streaming I/O, write throughput under high concurrency, and
       searches over multiple values in a btree
       index.
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
         
          
           linkend="app-pgcreatesubscriber">pg_createsubscriber,
-          a utility that logical replicas from physical standbys
+          a utility that creates logical replicas from physical standbys
         
        
        
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
      
       New client-side connection option, 
       linkend="libpq-connect-sslnegotiation">sslnegotiation=direct,
-      that allows direct TLS handshakes that avoids a round-trip negotation.
+      that performs a direct TLS handshake to avoid a round-trip negotiation.