From c8f61ebdc6e0a260efeef432239d4d2e8202a30d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Date: Thu, 2 May 2013 19:14:20 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] 9.3 release notes:  suggested improvements from Jeff Janes
 and Josh Berkus

---
 doc/src/sgml/release-9.3.sgml | 14 ++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.3.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.3.sgml
index e7f6c935347..2cd7a71aba7 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.3.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.3.sgml
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        Split pgstat file in per-database and global files (Tomas Vondra)
+        Split pgstat file into per-database and global files (Tomas Vondra)
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -1518,15 +1518,21 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
 
+      <listitem>
+       <para>
+        Allow write-enabled foreign data wrappers to support writes
+        (KaiGai Kohei)
+       </para>
+      </listitem>
+
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Add a Postgres foreign data wrapper contrib module (Shigeru
-        Hanada, KaiGai Kohei)
+        Hanada)
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        This foreign data wrapper allows writes;  potentially other
-        foreign data wrappers can now support writes.
+        This foreign data wrapper allows writes.
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
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