Add 9.2 release note suggestions from Heikki,
authorBruce Momjian
Thu, 10 May 2012 17:13:05 +0000 (13:13 -0400)
committerBruce Momjian
Thu, 10 May 2012 17:13:14 +0000 (13:13 -0400)
doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml

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         The range data type records a lower and upper bound, and supports
-        comparisons like contains, overlaps, and intersection.
+        operations like contains, overlaps, and intersection.
        
       
       
 
       
        
-        Allow a user to cancel queries in other owned sessions using 
+        Allow users to cancel queries in user-matching sessions using 
         linkend="functions-admin-signal">pg_cancel_backend()
         (Magnus Hagander)
        
 
       
        
-        Change default names of triggers to fire action triggers before
-        check triggers (Tom Lane)
+        Change default names of triggers to fire "action" triggers before
+        "check" triggers (Tom Lane)
        
        
        
       
        
         In psql tab completion,
-        complete SQL key words based on
+        complete SQL keywords based on
         COMP_KEYWORD_CASE setting and the perhaps case of
         the partially-supplied word (Peter Eisentraut, Fujii Masao)