doc: 9.4 release note adjustements

Text from David G Johnston

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.4.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.4.sgml
index 91a586f63ea55f2b0130a1956bb6e9507feb75c1..41256b7eea445cf21341c1b5a271d0049440b035 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.4.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.4.sgml
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
       linkend="functions-formatting-table">to_timestamp()
       and to_date() format strings to consume a corresponding
       number of characters in the input string (whitespace or not), then
-      conditionally additional adjacent whitespace if not in FX
+      conditionally consume adjacent whitespace if not in FX
       mode (Jeevan Chalke)
      
 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
       format string behaved like a single whitespace character and consumed
       all adjacent whitespace in the input string.  For example, previously
       format string space-space-space would consume only the first space in
-      ' 12', while it will not consume all three characters.
+      ' 12', while it will now consume all three characters.
      
     
 
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
      
 
      
-      Previously empty arrays were returned as one-dimensional empty arrays
+      Previously, empty arrays were returned as one-dimensional empty arrays
       whose text representation looked the same as zero-dimensional arrays
       ({}).  intarray's behavior in this area
       now matches the built-in array operators.
@@ -131,9 +131,9 @@
 
     
      
-      NULL 
+      Disallow NULL 
       linkend="xfunc-sql-variadic-functions">VARIADIC
-      function arguments are now disallowed (Pavel Stehule)
+      function arguments (Pavel Stehule)
      
 
      
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@
 
     
      
-      DISCARD ALL now also discards the state of sequences.
+      DISCARD ALL now also discards sequence state.
      
     
 
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@
 
       
        
-        During immediate shutdown, send uncatchable termination signals
+        During immediate shutdown send uncatchable termination signals
         to child processes that have not already shutdown (MauMau,
         Álvaro Herrera)
        
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@
 
        
         In contrast
-        to local_preload_libraries,
+        to local_preload_libraries
         this parameter can load any shared library, not just those in
         the $libdir/plugins directory.
        
@@ -789,8 +789,8 @@
       
        
         Have Windows ASCII-encoded databases and server process
-        (e.g.  postmaster) emit messages
-        in the LC_CTYPE-defined language (Alexander Law,
+        (e.g.  postmaster) emit messages
+        in the LC_CTYPE-defined language (Alexander Law,
         Noah Misch)
        
 
@@ -994,7 +994,7 @@
       
        
         Add WITH
-        ORDINALITY syntax which numbers rows returned from
+        ORDINALITY syntax to number rows returned from
         FROM-clause functions (Andrew Gierth, David Fetter)
        
 
@@ -1042,7 +1042,7 @@
          Add FORCE NULL option
          to COPY FROM which causes
          quoted strings matching the null string to be converted to NULL in
-         in CSV mode (Ian Barwick, Michael Paquier)
+         CSV mode (Ian Barwick, Michael Paquier)
         
 
         
@@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@
 
       
        
-        Improve the internal definition of system relations (Andres Freund,
+        Improve how system-level relations are designated (Andres Freund,
         Robert Haas)