Improve release wording.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
index 45138787508d558246239d92cf672bfe02fd3f47..e9ad1afb14db9a729fa12d7c900e85be5a2a6765 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 
 
 
@@ -35,16 +35,16 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.265 2004/06/12 04:08:02 momjian
 Fix temporary memory leak when using hashed aggregates (Tom)
 Ecpg fixes, including those for Informix compatibility (Michael)
 Fixes for compiling with thread-safety, particularly Solaris (Bruce)
-Fix error in termination of COPY IN mode when using old protocol (Tom)
-Several pg_autovacuum fixes, including fixes for large oids, stability, temp tables, and debug fixes (Matthew T. O'Connor)
-Fix problem with reading tar pg_dump's on NetBSD and BSD/OS (Bruce)
+Fix error in COPY IN termination when using the old network protocol (Tom)
+Several pg_autovacuum fixes, including fixes for large oids, stability, temp tables, and debug mode (Matthew T. O'Connor)
+Fix problem with reading tar dumps on NetBSD and BSD/OS (Bruce)
 Several JDBC fixes
-Fix for ALTER SEQUENCE RESTART where last_value was equals restart value (Tom)
-Support FULL JOIN with no join clauses, such as X FULL JOIN Y ON TRUE (Tom)
-Fix a zero-column bug (Tom)
+Fix ALTER SEQUENCE RESTART where last_value equals the restart value (Tom)
+Support FULL JOIN with no join clause, such as X FULL JOIN Y ON TRUE (Tom)
+Fix a zero-column table bug (Tom)
 Improve handling of non-qualitified identifiers in GROUP BY clauses (Tom)
 Do not allow NATURAL CROSS JOIN (Tom)
-Add missing check for invalid protocol packet length in binary COPY (Tom)
+Add check for invalid protocol packet length in binary COPY (Tom)
 
   This fixes a difficult-to-exploit security hole.