Doc: proofreading for v12 release notes.

Mostly markup improvements, with a couple of grammar fixes.

Liudmila Mantrova

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAEkD-mDxVV1Hrxzo3-hPaS5b1s-+Gin+9Cbu2eMBqRovRVjC0w@mail.gmail.com

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index e57154b387c54dd16872d388b7d3cd7cbf749939..acf77ec12e049f3a524a6f40bd03edc9c380ba8a 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
      
       Treat object-name columns in
       the information_schema
-      views as being of type name not varchar
+      views as being of type name, not varchar
       (Tom Lane)
      
 
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ Author: Heikki Linnakangas 
 
        
         Reduce the WAL write overhead
-        of GiST, GIN and
+        of GiST, GIN, and
         SP-GiST index creation (Anastasia Lubennikova,
         Andrey V. Lepikhov)
        
@@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ Author: Stephen Frost 
 -->
 
        
-        Allow TOASTed
+        Allow toasted
         values to be minimally decompressed (Paul Ramsey)
        
 
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas 
 -->
 
        
-        Allow ALTER TABLE .. SET
+        Allow ALTER TABLE ... SET
         NOT NULL to avoid unnecessary table scans (Sergei
         Kornilov)
        
@@ -1323,7 +1323,7 @@ Author: Noah Misch 
 -->
 
        
-        Allow ALTER TABLE .. SET DATA TYPE changing between
+        Allow ALTER TABLE ... SET DATA TYPE changing between
         timestamp and timestamptz to avoid a
         table rewrite when the session time zone is UTC
         (Noah Misch)
@@ -1438,7 +1438,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut 
        
         Progress is reported in the 
         linkend="create-index-progress-reporting">pg_stat_progress_create_index
-        system view
+        system view.
        
       
 
@@ -2235,7 +2235,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra 
       
 
       
-       This output can also be obtained in 
+       This output can also be obtained when using 
        by setting auto_explain.log_settings.
       
      
@@ -2620,7 +2620,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
 
       
        Add connection parameter 
-       to control libpq's TCP timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
+       to control libpq's TCP
+       timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
       
      
 
@@ -2631,9 +2632,9 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
 -->
 
       
-       Allow libpq (and thus psql) to report only
-       the SQLSTATE value in error messages (Didier
-       Gautheron)
+       Allow libpq (and thus
+       psql) to report only the
+       SQLSTATE value in error messages (Didier Gautheron)
       
      
 
@@ -2644,7 +2645,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
 -->
 
       
-       Add libpq
+       Add libpq
        function PQresultMemorySize()
        to report the memory used by a query result (Lars Kanis, Tom Lane)
       
@@ -2657,7 +2658,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut 
 -->
 
       
-       Remove the no-display/debug flag from libpq's
+       Remove the no-display/debug flag from libpq's
        options connection parameter (Peter Eisentraut)
       
 
@@ -2729,8 +2730,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
 -->
 
       
-       Allow vacuumdb to disable waiting for locks or skipping all-visible
-       pages (Nathan Bossart)
+       Allow vacuumdb to disable waiting for locks
+       or skipping all-visible pages (Nathan Bossart)
       
 
       
@@ -2835,9 +2836,13 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
 -->
 
        
-        Improve tab completion of CREATE TABLE, CREATE TRIGGER,
-        CREATE EVENT TRIGGER, ANALYZE, EXPLAIN, VACUUM, ALTER TABLE,
-        ALTER INDEX, ALTER DATABASE, ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN
+        Improve tab completion of CREATE TABLE,
+        CREATE TRIGGER,
+        CREATE EVENT TRIGGER,
+        ANALYZE, EXPLAIN,
+        VACUUM, ALTER TABLE,
+        ALTER INDEX, ALTER DATABASE,
+        and ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN
         (Dagfinn Ilmari Mannsåker, Tatsuro Yamada, Michaël Paquier,
         Tom Lane, Justin Pryzby)
        
@@ -2878,8 +2883,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
 -->
 
        
-        Improve precision of pgbench's --rate
-        option (Tom Lane)
+        Improve precision of pgbench's
+        --rate option (Tom Lane)
        
       
 
@@ -2889,8 +2894,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut 
 2018-10-15 [5b75a4f82] pgbench: Report errors during run better
 -->
        
-        Improve pgbench's error reporting with clearer messages and return
-        codes (Peter Eisentraut)
+        Improve pgbench's error reporting with
+        clearer messages and return codes (Peter Eisentraut)
        
       
 
@@ -3160,7 +3165,7 @@ existin
       
        This enables the development of new table
        access methods, which can optimize storage for different
-       use-cases.  The existing heap access method
+       use cases.  The existing heap access method
        remains the default.