Doc: some more v13 release note tweaking.

Justin Pryzby

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20200910222705[email protected]

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
index 0d2a928e0ed5bd16229345c1d3bca8e67f6d92e4..0ca970e452aa1bcf9378deab609574731a967db4 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro 
      
 
 
-SELECT round(sum(OLDVALUE / n::float)) FROM generate_series(1, OLDVALUE) s(n);
+SELECT round(sum(OLDVALUE / n::float)) AS newvalue FROM generate_series(1, OLDVALUE) s(n);
 
     
 
@@ -775,8 +775,8 @@ Author: Noah Misch 
 -->
 
        
-        Allow skipping of WAL for 
-        linkend="guc-full-page-writes">full table writes if 
+        Allow WAL writes to be skipped during a transaction
+        that creates or rewrites a relation, if 
         linkend="guc-wal-level"/> is minimal (Kyotaro
         Horiguchi)
        
@@ -1006,8 +1006,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
 
        
         Add leader_pid to 
-        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker ownership
-        (Julien Rouhaud)
+        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report a parallel worker's
+        leader process (Julien Rouhaud)
        
       
 
@@ -1261,8 +1261,9 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut 
 -->
 
        
-        Enable Unix-domain sockets
-        support on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
+        Enable support
+        for Unix-domain
+        sockets on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
        
       
 
@@ -1390,8 +1391,8 @@ Author: Fujii Masao 
 -->
 
       
-       Allow WAL recovery to continue even if invalid
-       pages are referenced (Fujii Masao)
+       Allow recovery to continue even if invalid
+       pages are referenced by WAL (Fujii Masao)
       
 
       




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