doc: change PG 14 relnotes as suggested by Justin Pryzby

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
index 3dc3c69031b80ecc165e543863e9620d476f3fa4..c23e4a45891d64caddd500acbdd19c377e44723b 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane 
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-Force custom server variable names to match the pattern used for unquoted SQL identifiers (Tom Lane)
+Require custom server variable names to match the pattern used for unquoted SQL identifiers (Tom Lane)
 
 
 
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ Remove server variable vacuum_cleanup_index_scale_factor (Pet
 
 
 
-This setting was disabled in PostgreSQL version 13.3.
+This setting was ignored starting in PostgreSQL version 13.3.
 
 
 
@@ -510,11 +510,11 @@ Author: Thomas Munro 
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-Add long-running queries to be canceled if the client disconnects (Sergey Cherkashin, Thomas Munro)
+Allow long-running queries to be canceled if the client disconnects (Sergey Cherkashin, Thomas Munro)
 
 
 
-The server variable client_connection_check_interval allows supporting operating systems, e.g., Linux, to automatically cancel queries by disconnected clients.
+The server variable client_connection_check_interval allows some supported operating systems to automatically cancel queries by disconnected clients.
 
 
 
@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ Add Set Server Name Indication (SNI) for SSL
 
 
 
-This can be disabled by turning client option "sslsni" off.
+This can be disabled by turning off client option "sslsni".
 
 
 
@@ -1439,7 +1439,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier 
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-Add %P to log_line_prefix to report the parallel group leader (Justin Pryzby)
+Allow %P in log_line_prefix to report the parallel group leader (Justin Pryzby)