9.5 release notes: adjustments suggested by Andres Freund

Report by Andres Freund

Backpatch through 9.5

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
index 2ed7b017b4bf974175c2e75336ef822523c63c15..52f89deaeeefe07e44a0880d6b926e4e787c2970 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
@@ -82,6 +82,16 @@
 
     
 
+     
+      Change pg_ctl's default shutdown mode from
+      smart to fast (Bruce Momjian)
+     
+    
+
+    
+
      
@@ -828,12 +838,12 @@ FIXME: Add docs about restartpoint behaviour change
 FIXME: Correct description
 -->
        
-        Allow labeling
-        of the origin of logical replication changes (Andres Freund)
+        Allow labeling of
+        the origin progress of logical replication changes (Andres Freund)
        
 
        
-        This helps with change tracking.
+        This is helpful when implementing replication solutions.
        
       
 
@@ -1085,9 +1095,9 @@ FIXME: Correct description
 2014-08-22 [f41872d] Alvaro..: Implement ALTER TABLE .. SET LOGGED / UNLOGGED
 -->
        
-        Allow to convert a WAL logged table to an UNLOGGED
-        one, and the other way round with
-        linkend="SQL-ALTERTABLE">ALTER TABLE .. SET LOGGED /
+        Allow changing of the WAL
+        logging status of a table ater creation with 
+        linkend="SQL-ALTERTABLE">ALTER TABLE .. SET LOGGED /
         UNLOGGED (Fabrízio de Royes Mello)
        
       
@@ -2187,10 +2197,10 @@ FIXME: Add more specifics?
 
        
         The remote snapshot must have been exported by
-        pg_export_snapshot() or been defined when creating
-        a logical replication slot.  This can be used by parallel
-        pg_dump to use a consistent snapshot across
-        pg_dump processes.
+        pg_export_snapshot() or logical replication slot
+        creation.  This can be used by another pg_dump to
+        use a share a consistent snapshot across pg_dump
+        processes.
        
       
 
@@ -2231,16 +2241,6 @@ FIXME: Add more specifics?
 
       
 
-       
-        Change pg_ctl's default shutdown mode from
-        smart to fast (Bruce Momjian)
-       
-      
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-      
-