Update comments and credit doc proofreaders

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
index 5152bb3fe4021d40bb20bc3b6bb26c770b3494ec..a4cebb4f3379c7a175e6f6685afc6826b0dc1ef8 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
@@ -1039,7 +1039,8 @@
        
         The new option is called NOT VALID, which can
         later be modified to VALIDATED and validation
-        checks performed.
+        checks performed. Together these allow you to add a Foreign Key
+        with minimal impact on read and write operations.
        
       
 
@@ -1587,21 +1588,21 @@
        
 
        
-        This feature can be used to implement updatable views.
+        This feature can be used to implement fully updatable views.
        
       
 
       
        
-        Reduce lock levels for 
+        Minimise lock levels for 
         linkend="SQL-CREATETRIGGER">CREATE TRIGGER
-        and some ALTER
+        and many ALTER
         TABLE and CREATE
         RULE operations (Simon Riggs)
        
 
        
-        This improves concurrency.
+        This improves database availability when altering active databases.
        
       
 
@@ -2551,6 +2552,13 @@
       
      
 
+     
+      
+        Extensive proofreading and documentation improvements
+        (Thom Brown, Josh Kupershmidt, Susanne Ebrecht)
+      
+     
+
      
       
        Add documentation for 




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