doc: update PG 11 release notes, mostly typo fixes

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAJnrtny0mYCMoRanZ1wvGqcPV-UDBoPetavDM1SqxnGVfZRV3g@mail.gmail.com

Author: Brad DeJong

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-11.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-11.sgml
index 5ce755f6474bf7066e4c936721e215fa4bd48f36..25b2ab19f288dc3c63686f67ef1c0960e417e3c5 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-11.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-11.sgml
@@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ same commits as above
 -->
 
        
-        Add default roles which controls file system access (Stephen Frost)
+        Add default roles which control file system access (Stephen Frost)
        
 
        
@@ -1325,7 +1325,7 @@ same commits as above
         pg_execute_server_program.  These roles now also
         control who can use COPY and extension 
         linkend="file-fdw">file_fdw.
-        Previously only super-users could use these functions, and that
+        Previously only superusers could use these functions, and that
         is still the default behavior.
        
       
@@ -1338,7 +1338,7 @@ same commits as above
        
         Allow access to file system functions to be controlled by
         GRANT/REVOKE permissions,
-        rather than super-user checks (Stephen Frost)
+        rather than superuser checks (Stephen Frost)
        
 
        
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        Previously super users were exclusively granted to access these
+        Previously, superusers were exclusively granted access to these
         functions.
        
 
@@ -1387,10 +1387,10 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        PostgreSQL only allows super-users to
+        PostgreSQL only allows superusers to
         access postgres_fdw tables without
         passwords, e.g. via peer.  Previously the
-        session owner had to be a super-user to allow such access;  now
+        session owner had to be a superuser to allow such access;  now
         the view owner is checked instead.
        
       
@@ -1424,7 +1424,7 @@ same commits as above
        
         Add server setting 
         linkend="guc-ssl-passphrase-command">ssl_passphrase_command
-        to allow supplying of the the passphrase for SSL
+        to allow supplying of the passphrase for SSL
         key files (Peter Eisentraut)
        
 
@@ -1467,7 +1467,7 @@ same commits as above
 
        
         The new unit is "B".  This is in addition to "kB", "MB", "GB"
-        and "TB", which were accepted previously.
+        and "TB".
        
 
       
@@ -1567,7 +1567,7 @@ same commits as above
 -->
 
        
-        Exclude unlogged, temporary tables, and
+        Exclude unlogged tables, temporary tables, and
         pg_internal.init files from streaming base
         backups (David Steele)
        
@@ -1726,8 +1726,8 @@ same commits as above
 
        
         Also, if any table mentioned in VACUUM uses
-        a column list, then ANALYZE keyword must be
-        supplied;  previously ANALYZE was implied in
+        a column list, then the ANALYZE keyword must be
+        supplied; previously, ANALYZE was implied in
         such cases.
        
       
@@ -1760,7 +1760,7 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        This is useful for allowing aggregate functions be optimized and
+        This is useful for allowing aggregate functions to be optimized and
         to work as window functions.
        
 
@@ -1803,7 +1803,7 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        Also allow PL/PL/Perl, PL/Python, and PL/Tcl to handle
+        Also allow PL/Perl, PL/Python, and PL/Tcl to handle
         composite-domain function arguments and results.  Also improve
         PL/Python domain handling.
        
@@ -1896,7 +1896,7 @@ same commits as above
        
         Add text search function 
         linkend="textsearch-functions-table">websearch_to_tsquery()
-        that supports a queries syntax similar to that used by web search
+        that supports a query syntax similar to that used by web search
         engines (Victor Drobny, Dmitry Ivanov)
        
       
@@ -1909,7 +1909,7 @@ same commits as above
        
         Add function 
         linkend="textsearch-functions-table">json(b)_to_tsvector()
-        to create text search query for matching
+        to create a text search query for matching
         JSON/JSONB values (Dmitry Dolgov)
        
 
@@ -2309,7 +2309,7 @@ same commits as above
 -->
 
        
-        Add approximated Zipfian-distributed random generator to
+        Add an approximated Zipfian-distributed random generator to
         pgbench (Alik Khilazhev)
        
       
@@ -2379,16 +2379,16 @@ same commits as above
 -->
 
        
-        Add 
+        Add an option to 
         linkend="app-pgbasebackup">pg_basebackup
-        option to create a named replication slot (Michael Banck)
+        that creates a named replication slot (Michael Banck)
        
 
        
         The option --create-slot creates
         the named replication slot (--slot)
         when the WAL streaming method
-        (-wal-method=stream) is used.
+        (--wal-method=stream) is used.
        
 
        
@@ -2560,7 +2560,7 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        This is useful if the system to be loaded has a different collation
+        This is useful if the system to be loaded has different collation
         definitions or endianness, requiring the rows to be stored in
         different partitions.
        
@@ -2572,7 +2572,7 @@ same commits as above
 -->
 
        
-        Add ability to suppress dumping and restoring of comments
+        Add an option to suppress dumping and restoring comments
         (Robins Tharakan)
        
 
@@ -2884,7 +2884,7 @@ same commits as above
        
 
        
-        Previously only super-users could call adminpack functions;
+        Previously only superusers could call adminpack functions;
         now role permissions are checked.
        
       




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