doc: Some release notes tweaking

Improve the LDAP DNS SRV item.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index bf32b200bf61267ff096e834c39b4c41f15e38d8..c1985d6822aec037ebc7f12a619c8b03f5e5e5b6 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -143,8 +143,7 @@
 
        
         
-         Discovery of LDAP servers if PostgreSQL is
-         built with OpenLDAP
+         Discovery of LDAP servers using DNS SRV records
         
        
 
@@ -1722,7 +1721,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro 
 
        
         This avoids the requirement of specifying
-        ldapserver, and is only supported if
+        ldapserver.  It is only supported if
         PostgreSQL is compiled with
         OpenLDAP.